wherever i am
no matter where i am
your memories are always with me
should i tell someone
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the last stanza of the poem is really nice and well framed... Bon Efforts...Keep writing... :)
One of your nice poem, it mixed with two poles of emotions and feelings. keep it up your words, poet! _Soul
Like I said before, I have been there many times and I survived! Very touching and deep! Honest feelings nicely flowing in this well penned write! Check some of my recent posted poems and for sure you will clearly see that I gone through this situation and I know that it hurts! You young and strong and you too, will survive and one morning you will look at the mirror and laugh and guess what? The mirror will laugh along with you! You will find happiness again! 10+++ Keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City
Sorrow is so profound can't be dug, only can be felt alone and alone. Thanks for sharing your grief in form of poem.
the whole world is with me, but still hidden from everybody loneliness lives in my heart/////// Beautiful line! ! ! ! !
His melancholy and sadness need to be overcome! Beautiful friend Poet!
Heart touching..... So honestly writen.... Keep going poet....