Blind fold my eyes,
and your hand in mine,
my steps in your shadow,
yes i can walk,
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''Blindfold my eyes, and your hand in mine, my steps in your shadow yes i can walk, wherever you go'' - - AN ITALIAN TRANSLATION of your opening lines ***: '' Bendati ho gli occhi e la tua mano è nella mia - muovo i miei passi nella tua ombra così da poter andare ovunque tu vada '' ________________ *** (not a literal one)
Wonderful theme, beautiful rhyme and nice imagery. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
your poem is a dance.. the dance of life.. Enjoyed. Thank you, Kirti