Tuesday, July 7, 2009
Where You Were Comments
Rating: ★0.0
I can not breach the glassy front,
when will I reach the place I thought I lived,
the home I once conjured,
with you in my bed.
...
Read full text
Justin Baker
COMMENTS
Irene Umulisa
07 July 2009
Wow, This is really deep...you are a great poet...very descriptive...you draw the reader in...and make them feel with you...
0
0
Reply
Best Poems
Best Member Poems
Best Classical Poems
New Poems
New Poets
Best Member Poets
Best Classical Poets
Explore Poems
Explore Poets
Poem Of The Day
Love Poems
Baby Poems
Death Poems
Sad Poems
Birthday Poems
Wedding Poems
Nature Poems
Sorry Poems
Hero Poems
Poetry E-Books
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
7/28/2025 3:51:53 AM # 1.0.0
one thing though...i noticed that you didnt use any punctuation marks and i had to keep on going back and forth to piece the flow of the poem...thinking the marks would make it lots easier to read...nonetheless the beauty of your poem is not lost...