Thursday, November 17, 2005

Where You Are Not At Helford Comments

Rating: 5.0

The waters edge with the tide out
Streams empty their drifting current
Into the low tide and still water
With gentle bubbles undercutting the salt
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Gerard Heathcote
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Fay Slimm 02 December 2008

A perfectly rhymed piece this Gerard - and again a place very familiar to me - - your last verse is thought provoking - with it's reference to 'ashes to the wind ' hope it is merely poetic licence and not what at first it appears to mean..... warm wishes from Fay. - - along with 10

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