Where You Are Comments

I searched the mountains I searched the plains I searched the jungles I even searched you in the rain I feel you next to me but I'm unable to see where you are Rachel Ann Butler

Beautiful poem! The search is always inward! Sometimes what we look out of us is hidden deep in ourselves. You are a good writer.

Where is she I don't know dear friend. Search inside... Nice love poem. Love with 10.

searching in all parts of the world? uhum, , , how sweet it is...where are u? ....wellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll, , , wait.........................am just hereeeeeeee......

A wonderful poem..........10++++++ Love & hugs.

I like these lines: I even searched you in the rain I tried to reach the sky I asked the moon, who plays seek and hide in the songs sung by birds in the flower ready to bloom in the trees swaying with breeze

this poem of yours is by far my most favorite I loved this poem great job Asif Baloch

touching piece....fine flowing....poetic... endless searching.....wonderful imagery expressing a hollow heart trying to find the love.... wonderful share.....hope you can take a glimpse on my ' WHY' ....a heart that has the same quest until....she found the feeling.. thanks for sharing...10++

the heart knows no boundaries in its quest. i loved this one!

I tried to reach the sky I asked the moon, who plays seek and hide I saw you in stars disguise I felt you in the first dew of rise but still i could not find where you are Wah Asif Bhai Wah... Loved it... Soo wonderfully written and emotions flow intensely preserving the rhythym... Sadness, severance and excruciating pain... I can feel this poem flowing through my heart and eyes... Well done... +++ 10

sweet and sad very nice. We always search for something. You have penned very well. Dear really very nice.

beautiful emotions dear. really heart touching. very nice

in the company of searching words...good company good poem you make, Aijaz...search your inside...that almost all seers say..a write different and creative...10