Tuesday, May 31, 2016

Where Words Weigh Heavy Comments

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 March 2022

A powerful write... extremely well penned with absolute brevity...5 stars

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Varsha M 08 January 2021

Yes sir this is so very true. You have penned it so well.

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Aarzoo Mehek 29 September 2016

Where is the pen n paper, you need to write down all the chaotic thoughts.... It happens sometimes tongue refuse to listen to the brain and words are stuck on the lips. Waiting eagerly to read all the unsaid words.10+++

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Unnikrishnan E S 29 September 2016

Thank you Aarzoo, You will hear them, sure! Thank you for your encouragement.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 September 2016

Refuse to move on! ! Thanks for sharing.

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 21 August 2016

Heavy heart pregnant with emotions unable to deliver the soul searching need, fantastic poem perfect thanks

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 September 2016

Thank you Saraswathy for the beautiful comment. I am obliged.

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Sarah Persson 13 July 2016

Very clever. So true what you say. I wish you much happiness that you may never feel this way, ever

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 July 2016

Hi Sarah, Thank you for visiting my poem and offering the comment. Your words are dear to me. Thank you.

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Sekharan Pookkat 16 June 2016

words are heavier when throat is dry

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 June 2016

Hi Sekharan, True, and throat dries up when heart gets inundated in welled up emotions. Unsaid words weigh heavy on the heart. Words refuse bless your pen.

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Susan Williams 08 June 2016

Anger is said to be devastating to the health, but I suspect heavy sorrowful words bottled up may be just as devastating. May we all find a way to deal with life without endangering ours. Well-written, my friend,

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 June 2016

Susan, Thank you. Words welled up with emotions are often left unspoken, for fear of opening up one's heart before the unfriendly world. Glad that you could read into the poem

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B.m. Biswas 02 June 2016

You have the feelings to feel....well written..

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 June 2016

Thank you Nurul.

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Nosheen Irfan 01 June 2016

So true. Unsaid words are the heaviest on heart. So thoughtfully n beautifully put.

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 July 2016

Nosheen, Thank you for the comments, adding aesthetic beauty to my little words.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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