Saturday, November 14, 2015

Where Will The Heart Lead? Comments

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Enough, of mind to rule my body
Now it’s time for a heart to take over
Life is pissed off
between time and discipline
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M. Asim Nehal
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Edward Kofi Louis 28 March 2016

Discipline! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Darren Jkoeryo 15 November 2015

My heart is eager to take this liberty after reading this poem.

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T Rajan Evol 15 November 2015

And it will lead u to correct place, a good soul will follow the right path, God bless u Asim

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Loke Kok Yee 15 November 2015

when I lie down it lead to sleep thanks Asim

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Mannah Shekh 15 November 2015

I am keeping my fingers cross to see Where will the heart lead? Yeah... I fully agree with you... It's so nice poem.. Thank you dear poet

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Chuy Amante 14 November 2015

from one extreme to the other the pendulum will swing your choosing balance makes mind and heart sing as 1

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M. Asim Nehal

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