Where Will My Haven Be Comments

this is your very sweet poem with quality of a nice song.. love it

valerie, i like the cradle for my mind. i liked this one more than youth long lost (next poem) , but they both seemed a little bleak.....i mean they sounded like coming from an unsatisfied soul. i hope that is how you wanted them to sound. not that there is anything wrong with the subject matter; i've had similar feelings at times i suppose. thanks for sharing. bri

This is a very amazing poem! ! !

Such visions of these travels are dreams made of.What a smooth flow of thought, lovely poem Val

Beautiful!

Lovely poem as always young lady. So very well written.

so peaceful.... a bandage for the troubled soul!

A soothing poem with mystery trails.... you will find when you looking with beauty hearts, with wide opened mind and fair eyes....someday you will have it in your day...answer all mysteries..like this much_Unwritten Soul

Very descriptive. And everyone is looking for their perfect haven. Great write Val. So many weary souls.

That final haven, of course, is where we shall lie while the world keeps turning for eternity. A most beautiful poem, Valerie, at last a poet who can write in rhyme and meter. So rare these days! Love it!

Lovely poem Val. Maybe the haven is in the words of this poem and their beautiful symbolism.

A powerful rendering from your golden plume ther' missy! I like this Val..It's deep and substanceful..Love this style of poetics..You Do Rock, ! And, I...after 38 hours without sleep, must retire to my chamberless chambers for at least some form of a catnap, as opposed to catnip...And I don't even own a cat, so how the 'ell am I gonna git' nipped by a cat in my chamberless chambers....Am I delerious or what? ..Convinced? Me too...nite-nite~FjR~

Perhaps that haven is a poets mind, brimmed to overflowing with calm and grace and beauty, that is forever showing and with a feather hand will always write and share a sanctury of knowing.

When reading your poetry I think of Bryon, Keats or Shelley, poets of the romantic era. After struggling with my envy, I must say- on P. H. it dosen't get any better then here. Don't stop

Wow, your haven appears so ravishing and the lines run with the flow of a smooth current ! ! !

Amazingly written, takes me to a place of imagination and beauty.

A very beautiful poem indeed. Val all I can say is Wow! tyvm

A very beautiful poem, an haven is what we all could do with every now and again. I really love this.

Wow! ! ! 'tis an amazing poem! ! ! ! ! ! A haven is also my dream To hide my spirit: : : : : : : Such a beutiful poem....... 100/100

Incredibly wonderful; your words are beauty! And I truly love the thought here.10 +