Saturday, April 11, 2009

Where, Where, Where? Comments

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Where, Where, Where?

You were not there
As she lay in fetal sleep
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Pranab K Chakraborty 19 May 2010

Another painting by words, caption perhaps 'The silence' Here and there the bridge between 'I exist' and 'I am not'. excellent. Drop of tear got its expansion as an ocean. Regards, 10++ pranab

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 16 March 2010

To Hon’ble Almedia Ma’am ‘…You’re not here because of enslaved Minds chained to old ideas….’ Here I agree one hundred times multiplied by ad infinitum … Emotion is no palpable thing but subsubtle- vibe… Why stay hooked up? Like screwed psyche…smothering…not get parched up... Let us have nimbleness … ‘Contraction is death expansion is life’. Swami Vivekananda 10+++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Claude H Oliver Ii 23 November 2009

Insightful, disconcerting and thought provoking.

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Bele Lele 25 August 2009

Love the rhyming at the bigining keep it up.

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Suicidal Magic 25 June 2009

yea an awsum poem... loved ur choice of words... itz amazing how you express urself!

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 11 April 2009

i love how u express ur thoughts into this poem.. bRILLIANT

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