Saturday, September 6, 2008

Where...Were You Yesterday When I Needed You Comments

Rating: 4.0

If only we had met yesterday
When love was new to both of us
And untarnished...
And dreams fashioned by hope and laughter
...
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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Magda Graf 20 September 2008

A deeply moving poem, full of loving and sadness. 'Today the daisies won't tell' - what a beautiful line. Love, Magda

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Alison Cassidy 12 September 2008

When I read your comment on one of mine, I knew that you could write. As I read this poem, I am delighted to discover that I was right. This piece is beautifully expressed - romantic without being sentimental and most satisfying in its phrasing and language. An enchanting poem that beings a tear. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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