Sunday, August 11, 2019

Where Were You? Comments

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Where were you?
In that silent night
Where were you,
During the dark time
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Falana Zion
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Here am I, my dear poet , imbibing aesthetic energy from your words of darktimes. Happy to read your melancholic melody, soothing with an echoing question... Desamangalam Ramakrishnan, Kerala, India

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Here am I, my dear poet , imbibing aesthetic energy from your words of darktimes. Happy to read your melancholic melody, soothing with an echoing question

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Buddy Bee Anthony 16 August 2019

I love your tender subtlties along with your demands for an answer for the too often unanswerable and gut wrenching question of 'where were you'? It attacks my sensorium on many levels. It has an ebb and a flow, a low and a high tide

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Panagiota Romios 12 August 2019

Makes one wonder and ponder. Well written! Thank you. Pangiota

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 August 2019

Very impressive write, Falana Zion. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 11 August 2019

Well articulated and nicely brought forth with insight. Thanks for sharing, Zion.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 August 2019

oceans held its ride ...TIDE WOULD BE BETTER WHERE WERE YOU ALL THIS TIME NOW ALSO READ MOMS SMILES ETC AND TELL ME WHERE WERE YOU GOOD POET FRIEND R U FIZ

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Falana Zion

Falana Zion

Ekiti State, Nigeria
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