Sunday, November 6, 2011

Where Were You Comments

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</>where were you
when I was feeling down
no body to talk to
or anywhere to go
...
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Sara Panicali
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Harindhar Reddy 11 November 2011

Again I like the this line. it is the core of your poem. Your poem circled around it, in the end a brilliant poem was produced by you Sara! 10++++++++ 'where were you when I was feeling down'

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Kevin Patrick 07 November 2011

I love your stream of consciounce writing it allows you to formulate ideas with clarity and brevity with great sincerity. Another good work sara

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