</>where were you
when I was feeling down
no body to talk to
or anywhere to go
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I love your stream of consciounce writing it allows you to formulate ideas with clarity and brevity with great sincerity. Another good work sara
Again I like the this line. it is the core of your poem. Your poem circled around it, in the end a brilliant poem was produced by you Sara! 10++++++++ 'where were you when I was feeling down'