Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, September 15, 2009

Where Were You Comments

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Where you when light were went off?
I was frightened and cried for wolf
Wife whispered in ears few lines of song
I couldn't think what actually went wrong
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Sachin Goswami 04 October 2009

May be it was unexpected and all of sudden Not easy to skip off when worries are laden Loud sound may wake you up unaware All thought may appear as shining flare

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Antonio Liao 22 September 2009

Aim so allure; laugh as if the smile turns to a big bang theory....so awesome an opulent words of reality.....so nice to remember between each moment happened at night.....quite a night of victory...thank you....you bits my heart my friend...God bless....10 +++++

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Indani Narayan 16 September 2009

could not laugh at silly exposure It proved me as coward and unsure What could I do in difficult situation?

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Vijay Suwarnkar 16 September 2009

Not easy to skip off when worries are laden Loud sound may wake you up unaware All thought may appear as shining flare

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Sulochna Pandit 16 September 2009

May be it was unexpected and all of sudden Not easy to skip off when worries are laden

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Raju Rajput 16 September 2009

Wife whispered in ears few lines of song I couldn’t think what went wrong

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Jigisha Vyas 16 September 2009

What could I do in difficult situation? This put me in difficult and awkward position

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Maulin Shah 16 September 2009

What could I do in difficult situation? This put me in difficult and awkward position

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Suwarna Patil 16 September 2009

So many thoughts crossed the mind Sudden break off light was seemingly unkind

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Ratna Patel 16 September 2009

So many thoughts crossed the mind Sudden break off light was seemingly unkind

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Ketan Rajgor 16 September 2009

could not laugh at silly exposure It proved me as coward and unsure What could I do in difficult situation?

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Radha Seth 16 September 2009

Loud sound may wake you up unaware All thought may appear as shining flare

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Saroj Davde 16 September 2009

I could not laugh at silly exposure It proved me as coward and unsure

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Poonam Suthar 16 September 2009

This clearly speaks the state of mind This sudden shock is not something new find

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Kashi Paul 16 September 2009

Not easy to skip off when worries are laden Loud sound may wake you up unaware All thought may appear as shining flare

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Umesh Lalvani 16 September 2009

very good poem indeed....10

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Sachin Goswami 16 September 2009

could not laugh at silly exposure It proved me as coward and unsure What could I do in difficult situation

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Sagarika Shah 16 September 2009

could not laugh at silly exposure It proved me as coward and unsure

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Twinkle Vohra 16 September 2009

Parent to children also find no warmth and co relation Meeting with friends also create no elation

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Edwina K 16 September 2009

So many thoughts crossed the mind Sudden break off light was seemingly unkind

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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