Monday, May 25, 2015

Where Were You? Comments

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At this stage of life I can't help but ask
What was all my suffering for?
When life's tempests claimed their tolls, where were you....
When I gave all, and there was no more?
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Lora Colon
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Jak Black 26 May 2015

A lovely poem, Lora, sad though it may be. Where are you? Was this someone you loved and lost, or perhaps the love that you longed for?

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Mr. M Jamal 25 May 2015

My eyes are dead now, they no longer feel, Enough tears were shed long ago, As the light in my eyes dimmed, where were you.... When tears flowed like streams of melted snow? In the name of love and betrayal Delight to read. wonderful choice of words and emotional content is very strong :)

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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