**where Were She? Comments

lovely Lago..loved the heartfelt ending of this poem, ..sorry was facing trouble s in commenting since monthes

Pain in her deep rooted heart spell but nothing in smile her scanty eyes and dried bossom O! Orient rays tell me Where were She? ............stillsmiled inpain...lovely craftd words inthe poem.....beautiful words....10 read mine..................still breathing.....pain................i miss..miss i miss you

Maybe she is on poemhunter.. hahaha Well written

it was a touch of a tender heart.10

'Pain in her deep rooted heart spell but nothing'... that makes the soul of the poem...very meaningful...thanks

Aww...beautiful feel is there in this write. Title is apt. Heart felt composition.

Oh! my breathless aroma breaks my lips of zooming emotion of love.... you got my life and exploded in the air, like a balloon of hyacinth smoke of awe...... thank you my dear friend.......what brought you in my mind, to dream that you are there....my salute of lines you utter wonder my hope to life seeing you someday.... may God bless you...a star and a 10 +++

Beautiful lines here, a stunning start and nice ending! 10

Otherwise she is a metaphor of winter gloom! Heart moving piece!

lovely emotive piece...........heartfelt voices painted here!