Wednesday, March 19, 2008

Where We Go Comments

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where we go
nobody needs to know
where we are
is where you'll be
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Khairul Ahsan 27 May 2015

I've just read this beautiful poem of yours. Tender feelings expressed in simple language. 'just as long as were together nobody needs to know where we go' - that's teen age love!

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Greenwolfe 1962 03 August 2008

I absolutely love simple expressions of simple ideas. You did it very well here as you came back to where you started. It indicated that this was a thoughtful piece. Also illustrated creativity. GW62

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Alexandros Filippakis 15 June 2008

very sensitive. There is hope in your words

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Jerry Hughes 28 March 2008

Nice one E, good luck with the year 12 exams...

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Amie-Lee ...... 24 March 2008

Good work. I like it.

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