where we go
nobody needs to know
where we are
is where you'll be
...
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I absolutely love simple expressions of simple ideas. You did it very well here as you came back to where you started. It indicated that this was a thoughtful piece. Also illustrated creativity. GW62
I've just read this beautiful poem of yours. Tender feelings expressed in simple language. 'just as long as were together nobody needs to know where we go' - that's teen age love!