Monday, August 18, 2008

Where Violet Lilies Grow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beneath the earth where violet lilies grow -
Macabre hands fold across a gaunt chest.
Golden ring lies limply on a skeletal digit.
Pristine black suit now tattered from years,
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Kim Schilling
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Tarun Sharma 20 August 2008

sounds like a portrait rhyme like a chime! My rgds! !

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Dawn Slanker 19 August 2008

wow...great imagery. Very descriptive and great word choices. An enjoyable read.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 18 August 2008

interesting! could you read my new poems too? specially, American Gothic. Thank you.

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James Timothy Jarrett 18 August 2008

Gruesome but good. A walk on the dark side

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Kim Schilling

Kim Schilling

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