Where to go? Where to go?
Who knows road? You show.
Moving on ground we feel,
On thinking heads do rill.
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Yet another profound poem from your pen. Thanks for sharing 10+++
We are often confused as to which route we should choose. But when the Power above directs us, the confusion clears and we will choose the right direction and reach our destination! Your faith in God is your mainstay Kumaramani sir!
After long tiring journey of line we reach the eternal abode of god and it's worth every step. Very nice and thought provoking poem.
picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xThe wordplay in this is excellent. 2 Dec 2014 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Fay Slimm xA needed reminder that we humans are here for good reason - - to sing the praises of being created to rest in God. An inspiring read dear poet-friend and thank you for sharing. 2 Dec 2014 by Fay Slimm | Reply picture of Mr. Frivolous xWe move on and soon we nod. I love the way you put the hard truth with gentleness. A great write sir. 2 Dec 2014 by Mr. Frivolous | Reply Note: these review comments are received via PF.
We have to find our path of living where peace might be dwelling. This poem is interesting.