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A thoughtful write sir, well penned!

These were the old divine rights of the kings King was master and we the animals in rings No voice to be heard with clipping of wings

Good write........................10s

The poem is about the ancient rights of kings. All too often kings would ignore what's in the best interest of the citizens. Their major concern was yielding and maintaining power. But, according to the poem, live as we do on this planet, we have to make compromises and learn to live with evil. But that doesn't exactly mean folding up our hands and giving up. We can develop ourselves spiritually, on the quiet, and poor leaders over time will simply disappear. After all, it's well known that leaders are embodiments of our own passions; they are not all that different from us. They may love power, but so do we. It's just that they're in a position to exercise their power more (though today, some of those tendencies are curbed through assemblies and courts) . Thank you, sir. It's a thoughtful piece.

Life is short and has to be compromised When words are reneged initially promised There is no use for blood to get boiled Only strong resolves to get attempts foiled Still nothing is slipped away and out of hand Rule should prevail with respect to holy land ............very well written. apt...Thanks for sharing

Is it wise to turn the kingdom into holy land? Leaving the subjects into the unholy hands?

'When kingdom is handed over to wolves...' Very true. Great write. Thanks for sharing with me

There is no use for blood to get boiled Only strong resolves to get attempts foiled Still nothing is slipped away and out of hand Rule should prevail with respect to holy land 10++++++++++++ great meaningful poem! ~

Life is short and has to be compromised When words are reneged initially promised Thousands of leaders have come into being Promises forgotten and no welfare to bring----> they brought nothing... just liar saying and counterfeit dicta

When kingdom is handed over to wolves.....10

These were the old divine rights of the kings...10

All rights and freedom may also to curtail......10

Is it wise to turn the kingdom into holy land? Leaving the subjects into the unholy hands? ......10

Where to go for complaint? When king becomes blind and turn saint? ......10

When king becomes blind and turn saint? .......10

Such was state and no worry for subject Power or authority only main object...10

kingshavegonebut good diction on it...10

Whole mystery surrounds and treachery involves.........10

Allow anarchy and misery to prevail All rights and freedom may also to curtail.......10

Where to go for complaint? When king becomes blind and turn saint? .........10