Bullet or a bomb
Both are blind and numb
Wall or a roof
Body or a soul
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nasir, a very powerful poem my friend...... we poets declare war against WAR...........terror.............
wow this was awesome and touching and very sad. i think its wonderful! erica
great write...runs with depth with strong concepts... wholesome, dignified and interesting thoughts' provoking 10++
I like this poem's flow. the effects are written creatively and are indeed strong
very powerful, bullet or bomb have no conscience, they don't discriminate... but who's behind them?
your really good at right poems i wish i was that good........
This is a very well written poem with good diction and important message.
A very unique way of expressing the destruction that war brings. Very quick, flowing read.
bravo, bravo...a marvellous write Sir and so true, so painfully true....thanks many 10'ssssss for this master piece.... rgds asif
Naseer, this poem shows your keen intelligence and maturity, Well done!
Sooo true and it's soooo sad it touched my heart: ') your writing is great I loved it..
well...it jst reflect the reality....i liked it much...thnx 4 sharing such a meaningful peom
A thought provoking poem, they come from the spring of hatred and from the evil omen.