Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Where They Come From? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bullet or a bomb
Both are blind and numb
Wall or a roof
Body or a soul
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir
COMMENTS
M Asim Nehal 13 September 2018

A thought provoking poem, they come from the spring of hatred and from the evil omen.

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premji premji 10 February 2010

nasir, a very powerful poem my friend...... we poets declare war against WAR...........terror.............

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Josh George 25 May 2009

the words you write moved me in a way that few do

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Leslie Rodriguez 24 May 2009

love the comparisons. the whole poem itself is great :)

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Koshal Sharma 21 May 2009

ultimate! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Erica Olson 19 May 2009

wow this was awesome and touching and very sad. i think its wonderful! erica

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Terry Finch 19 May 2009

Bullet or bomb and now germs. Interesting thoughts here. Terry

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White Rose 19 May 2009

From here and there They come from everywhere.....

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Miriam Maia Padua 18 May 2009

great write...runs with depth with strong concepts... wholesome, dignified and interesting thoughts' provoking 10++

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Monesh Kumar 18 May 2009

I like this poem's flow. the effects are written creatively and are indeed strong

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Colton Foltz 17 May 2009

It was powerful. Nice poems

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Sonya Florentino 17 May 2009

very powerful, bullet or bomb have no conscience, they don't discriminate... but who's behind them?

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Tanisha Fischbach 16 May 2009

your really good at right poems i wish i was that good........

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Isaac Maliya 15 May 2009

This is a very well written poem with good diction and important message.

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Jennifer Cottrell 15 May 2009

This poem is very well written!

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Greg Oosterhouse 14 May 2009

A very unique way of expressing the destruction that war brings. Very quick, flowing read.

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Aijaz Asif 13 May 2009

bravo, bravo...a marvellous write Sir and so true, so painfully true....thanks many 10'ssssss for this master piece.... rgds asif

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Julius Babarinsa 13 May 2009

Naseer, this poem shows your keen intelligence and maturity, Well done!

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Sooo true and it's soooo sad it touched my heart: ') your writing is great I loved it..

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tara star 13 May 2009

well...it jst reflect the reality....i liked it much...thnx 4 sharing such a meaningful peom

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