Thursday, November 30, 2017

Where There Is No Vision Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do we not keep time with faithful clocks…
Moor our ships, by the shore, beside dry wooden docks?
When we sleep, do we dream below the same yellow stars
Are we here, on a planet, between Venus and Mars?
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Joe Fraccalvieri
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 November 2017

Good news gives regards and beauty of perception motivates mind and due care fills life in light. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.10

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 30 November 2017

Nice write Joe. Like stanza 7 and 8.... you may like to rate my poem: When His Kingdom Comes

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 November 2017

Such an uplifting poem, Joe... a huge 10👍👍👍

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Joe Fraccalvieri 30 November 2017

Thank you, Bernard. Your comment means a lot to me. Have a great day- Joe

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Joe Fraccalvieri 01 December 2017

Thank you, Bernard! Your comments are greatly appreciated- Joe

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