Sunday, January 7, 2018

Where There Is Always A Passing Train To Look On Comments

Rating: 5.0

A daily ritual
In the late afternoon of life
My sheepish black dog accompanies me
To the rail station
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Madathil Rajendran Nair
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Susan Williams 06 April 2018

Thank you, thank you, thank you for taking me down to the train depot where I spent a remarkable afternoon watching and hearing and feeling the vibrations of the coming trains and the departing trains with you and your dog! ! ! This is a fascinating and extraordinarily well written poem! ! ! 10++++ and to my fav list it goes! ! ! .

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Bisy Untan 20 January 2018

The monotony of life mixed with philosophy turns to a beautiful poem. The companionship, sights and sounds spread a colourful canvas and so the mood of the poem takes me to a world of hope and extreme joy.Thank you Sir.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 08 February 2018

Thank you, poet, so much for your beautiful thoughts. A fantastic response from an intelligent reader. What more than this an aspiring poet like me can ask for! ?

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 January 2018

The rushing noise goes away so far while train moves forward within few minutes. Kids see train from far and get happiness. Every journey carries hope and delights mind. This poem is excellently penned...10

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Madathil Rajendran Nair

Madathil Rajendran Nair

Bombay, India
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