Wednesday, January 29, 2020

Where There Are My Friends With Rainbows Comments

Rating: 5.0

An ancient football match that started with a big bang,
the black hole was divided in so many good teams,
with fear of defeat and its consequences
with greed of victory and its benefits!
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 January 2020

I concur with the wonderful comments of Unwritten Soul. So true. This beautiful write is woven by a great thinker. Very perceptive.

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Unwritten Soul 29 January 2020

Sometimes i do wondering that you are not just a common writer, i mean there is something else that you own by you that i can say your own signature as what i see here you have a vast of knowledge. I can see many times you decorate your poem with rare things to present your statement. This poem is one of how you twist the plots nicely.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 January 2020

your words flow like a steam as people fans playing football scream well done but for the length old cataract eyes it dreams

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