Thursday, August 16, 2012

'Where The Truth Lies' Comments

Rating: 5.0

She calls herself an independent woman
so what am I to think,
when she sits next to me at the bar
and asks me to pay for drinks,
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Bernard Snyder
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Eden Panotes Orbista 08 September 2013

the truth lies beneath....hahaha honesty please, your subject if she's real, must have observed, less talk, less mistake, ....she was caught in her own trap, but this is full of humor, well written....

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Khairul Ahsan 13 August 2013

A story told in not too many words, with good humor. The last two lines complete the description of his woman. The last line answers the question at the title.

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Elena Plotkin 01 August 2013

I have to give you props! ! 10+.

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Gillena Cox 09 January 2013

made me smile, witty little rhyme

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Gillena Cox 09 January 2013

made me smile, witty little rhyme

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Paul Brookes 06 January 2013

Great well written with just a tinge of humour loves it....................................: O)

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 15 September 2012

This poem is so magnificent and great. nice paradox is used at the title of the poem. great one. well done.

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Guy Lip-more 21 August 2012

Hi Bernard, Good and humerous, like your wit and talent.

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Bernard Snyder

Bernard Snyder

Savannah Ga.
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