Monday, April 9, 2018

Where The River Ends Comments

Rating: 5.0

I follow the pale, silken river
of your outstretched leg
from the river mouth, where
your painted toes glittered
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Gordon R Menzies
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C F 15 June 2019

Fantastic sensual write... very original.10+

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Deam William Johnston 19 January 2019

Hi jez. Enjoy your poem Dean

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2018

Please treat 'poem' instead of 'piem'.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2018

Fantastic expression with touching dictions. Beautiful piem on love. Thank you dear Gordon, keep the ball rolling.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2018

The river of love is home of emotion and love of home is life like river. A brilliant poem is very well penned...10

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