Saturday, March 4, 2006

Where The Passion Flower Grows Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lay down on your pillow
and turn the lights down low
let me take you to the garden
where the passion flower grows
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Charles M Moore
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Brian Dorn 25 March 2007

Wow, good stuff, Charles! Cleverly worded and brilliantly arranged! ! Brian

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Carmalin Sophia 06 March 2007

that was perfectly passionate! !

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Arti S 01 August 2006

Beautiful write...wonderful flow...Perfect passion!

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Esther Leclerc 21 July 2006

Erotic perfection indeed, nuanced just so... The mood is beautifully passionate. Love this...

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Will Barber 19 July 2006

The passion flower is, indeed, an exotic and fragrant bloom. It travels far to find a suitable place to climb, flourishing from shaded root to sunlit glory. A passionate and beautiful flower of a poem.

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Patricia Gale 04 March 2006

Lovely Charlie, beautifuly written, one of your beat A heart felt sigh whilst I walk through the garden., the fragrance of love. Patricia

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Gina Onyemaechi 04 March 2006

I didnt' want this to finish, Charles. I could live in these words forever. I better go before I start crying! Warm regards and a score of 10 from Gina.

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Charles Chaim Wax 04 March 2006

going into the interior universe of delight and then the inevitable happens swift joy lingers then refuses to leave a fine poem

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

Glasgow Scotland.
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