Yes, I know,
It was inevitable.
Even though,
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A little bit of wistfulness in facing the truth, this is a graceful write. The final lines provide the perfect end/beginning... Esther: ]
wow...this is your best so far...diehard romantic...thats dee daffodil...just like your name...lovely...love..nalini
very romantic. i was reading some other poems you've written, i like them a lot. you're a great poet. leo
What a romantic poem. Even if it is sad......the romance is very powerful and you can't help but root for these lovers. Another beautiful poem! Sincerely, Mary
DEE...BEAUTIFUL, VERY WELL WRITTEN WORK...HOW 'BOUT SOME MORE DAFFODILS FOR OUR GARDENS, DEE? ...PICK-UP THAT PEN YOUNG LADY & SHARE THE GOLD! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK
this too is very beautiful...you are strong, able to make such choices....love, nalini.
Beautiful, great imagery and flow with an economy of words. Very impressed. -chuck
Loved the flow and rhythm here Dee, a tale of love divided, two viewpoints clearly seen. Kind regards, Justine.
I have known such wistful longing... of facing the inevitable. I like this poem, Dee. dan
Hi Dee. Theres always a chance of meeting again werever it may be. Thanks for the read Regards Dave T