Wednesday, May 28, 2008

Where The Dead Grass Grows Comments

Rating: 3.5

No, brother, we shouldn’t go there.
Let’s turn and go another way.
‘Cause you know the dead grass grows where
You are on your last day.
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Stephen Carey
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Frank Cannon 12 June 2008

Shows a lively imaginative mind at work. Well done Stephen.

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Greenwolfe 1962 28 May 2008

This one has three fair verses,2-4. Beyond that, it is not well written. The inconsistent rhythm and rhyme destroy whatever merit there is in the poem. The poem itself is interesting in proposing that death grows the grass. A poetic possibility, but a scientific question of great mystery. GW62

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Ben Gieske 28 May 2008

I like this poem because it makes me think.

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