Wednesday, May 29, 2019

Where Stars (Rubiyat Sonnet) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where stars are in the tree of the night
they do glow in the dark blue-white
when like a cat the moon sneaks higher up
before the red-day brings its bright light
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 May 2019

The beginning stanza is much impressive with metaphor having touching expression. It is really a beautiful poem on love and life having nice penmanship. Thanks for sharing.10

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