Wednesday, July 25, 2007

! Where Sexy Meets Demure In A Place Called Trim Comments

Rating: 2.7

In the seat opposite in the underground
in the off-peak afternoon,
neat shoes, nice legs, skirt just the exact right length
where demure meets sexy in a place called trim;
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Michael Shepherd
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Gina Onyemaechi 29 July 2007

Love the line. There's a skill in celebrating sexuality without being tacky. Good you.

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Ernestine Northover 25 July 2007

Wonderful read Michael. You gave a lovely picture here and gave us a great travel monologue and advertisement. One always wonders if these 'models' are as perfect as they look, off camera. Great write. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Oh M! Anna said just pretty much what I was going to say. I agree on that line and I agree on this being one of your best. Of course, you should have just averted your eyes. Then again you're such a gent (as if I didn't know) ... others' thoughts would have wandered in an entirely different direction! So clever, pensive and expertly, controlledly-wandering, this piece. A real treasure. Bit like you then. t x

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Anna Russell 25 July 2007

Wow, I think this may be one of your best Michael, it's an absolute joy to read. And I love that line - where demure meets sexy in a place called trim. Hugs Anna xxx

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