Monday, January 6, 2014

Where's The Starlit Sky Gone? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where's the starlit sky gone? Nocturnal sky's glow
dimmed by by faux lights, the moon's paralysed
Luster behind a sheet of earthly glaze
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Yasmin Khan
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 November 2014

A sublime poem in great metaphor wow! I find how u used cypress and goblets and other terms very tasteful and poetic. Take care.

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Shahzia Batool 25 February 2014

the 2nd visit offered an awesome read again...beautiful!

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Md Asadullah 26 January 2014

Real world lost in new superficial and materialistic world, it's a profound write, thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 24 January 2014

Powerfully unravels a mood of gloom and dejection! But be hopeful....! In the wilderness with no blooms and buds, another spring will visit! !

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Shahzia Batool 07 January 2014

I can't quote the entire poem here but i can tell that you have a master-hand in weaving images...kamaal poem he yasmeen!

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