Goodbyes break your heart
It can tear you apart..
Sentiments never subside
Other's commit suicide..
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for the most part, the poem makes saying “goodbye” sound like a negative experience, but in the following three parts, there is at least hope for a positive outcome. “Goodbye see you soon..” and “Goodbye awaits a new beginning” and “Goodbye eradicate the pain of darkness” [I’m not sure I understand this part] the title is catchy and the poem gives one something to think about (if one likes to think about things!) I like the little bit of rhyming. and I like the poet’s note! bri :) thanks. I’ll send some ‘suggestions’ privately.
thanks once again Bri...by the way..I haven't receive any suggestions yet..
“Goodbye eradicate the pain of darkness” [I’m not sure I understand this part] meaning goodbye in this line will put an end of sadness
Wow an interesting title that puts forward a true question. Goodbyes are not always good and yes can be real saddening. Kudos for this lovely poem. Nice to read from you again.
THANK YOU FOR YOUR WARMTH COMMENTS..IT INSPIRED ME MORE TO WRITE.. EVEN IM BUSY WITH WORK I WILL GIVE TIME TO WRITE..
i like how it taps into more than just one mood of Good bye.