Monday, June 29, 2015

Where's The Good In Goodbye? Comments

Rating: 3.5

Goodbyes break your heart
It can tear you apart..
Sentiments never subside
Other's commit suicide..
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Rickon Chewe 28 August 2015

i like how it taps into more than just one mood of Good bye.

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Bri Edwards 07 August 2015

for the most part, the poem makes saying “goodbye” sound like a negative experience, but in the following three parts, there is at least hope for a positive outcome. “Goodbye see you soon..” and “Goodbye awaits a new beginning” and “Goodbye eradicate the pain of darkness” [I’m not sure I understand this part] the title is catchy and the poem gives one something to think about (if one likes to think about things!) I like the little bit of rhyming. and I like the poet’s note! bri :) thanks. I’ll send some ‘suggestions’ privately.

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Ging Taping 28 August 2015

thanks once again Bri...by the way..I haven't receive any suggestions yet..

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Ging Taping 14 September 2016

“Goodbye eradicate the pain of darkness” [I’m not sure I understand this part] meaning goodbye in this line will put an end of sadness

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 31 July 2015

Wow an interesting title that puts forward a true question. Goodbyes are not always good and yes can be real saddening. Kudos for this lovely poem. Nice to read from you again.

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Ging Taping 31 July 2015

THANK YOU FOR YOUR WARMTH COMMENTS..IT INSPIRED ME MORE TO WRITE.. EVEN IM BUSY WITH WORK I WILL GIVE TIME TO WRITE..

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Sekharan Pookkat 30 June 2015

It is true- well said Ging-

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