Sunday, September 20, 2015

Where Nothing Can Be Hid Comments

Rating: 5.0

your pompous words
speak weakness
loud and clear
its just an ocean
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Dorsey Baker
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Roseann Shawiak 20 September 2015

An excellent and detailed imagery depicting truths being hidden until lights are shone upon them. Very intense rhythm throughout your poem, giving a more forceful meaning to your words and message. Really great poem! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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