Thursday, October 4, 2012

Where My Heart Lies Comments

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I can still feel its beats,
The slow rhythm still exists to this day
But inside this human form
my heart is not where it lays
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Alyssa Ellis
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Ency Bearis 10 October 2012

superb write well expressed thoughts peotically

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Words' Knight 08 October 2012

No its not weired, but you still loveing him coz your heart is pure, In addition to that he doesn't deserve you coz he believed easely people's lies, Nice writing, and deep feelings well done.

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Alyssa Ellis 08 October 2012

thank you guys! ! Ill be posting more sometime soon! Hope to hear yalls comments on those!

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Michael Silver 05 October 2012

Very well written, thought out, and relatable. Can't wait to read your poems in the future! '?'

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Stephanie Wright 05 October 2012

its not weird. that kind of love doent just go away over night. very nice i liked it.

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