We are floating on the stream of Time,
In this earthly world which is full of hustle-bustle,
To meet the necessity and ends,
Life is beyond this, for sure.
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Everybody's dream of such place. May we all reside there in the realm of god Eid Mubarak Asim. Salamat raho.
That's right Asim ji. Let us move to the place where love flows.....
This is what all wish...to find such a peaceful place is what matters a lot...interesting poem...5*****
Wonderful Let us float on with ease there, Where Time has no meaning,
BUT you get the 5 Stars Fullest On Top for your poem full of brilliance. Surely I have enjoyed again!
Outside the limits of this earth, Where there is neither sun nor moon, Neither earth nor the sky above., I am the only one asking you, dear cute poet, I cannot find that serene life, since I am nowhere upon this earth at all as you desrcibed that so, Sir.
We are all in such need of serenity and peace as you, dear poet so well describe in your lovely poem. But I'm afraid that perfect world only exists in the verses of a poem like this. Great write, anyway!
I love these thoughts they bring such a beautiful feel to the heart! ..
Magnificent! .. Ever so enchanting! .. Filled with such beauty, heart and peace! .. Simply wonderful! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
Sir this is beautiful. Indeed Chain of time, chain of work all makes us difficult. We all seek that that. Beautiful sirji
This imagery rich verse is very peaceful and beautifully written.5 stars
Incredibly penned poem, full of imagery and thought-provoking ideas, rated 5*
Timeless beauty,