Sunday, July 18, 2021

Where Life Flows In Serenity ~ Let's Go There. Comments

Rating: 5.0

We are floating on the stream of Time,
In this earthly world which is full of hustle-bustle,
To meet the necessity and ends,
Life is beyond this, for sure.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Juhaina Tumlu 21 July 2021

Timeless beauty,

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Aarzoo Mehek 20 July 2021

Everybody's dream of such place. May we all reside there in the realm of god Eid Mubarak Asim. Salamat raho.

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Thank you for these serene thoughts......top stars

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That's right Asim ji. Let us move to the place where love flows.....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 July 2021

Absolutely a brilliant poem......top score!

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Indira Renganathan 20 July 2021

This is what all wish...to find such a peaceful place is what matters a lot...interesting poem...5*****

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Michael Jack 20 July 2021

Wonderful Let us float on with ease there, Where Time has no meaning,

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Shreya Hacks 20 July 2021

Let me take my horse there. Good place and good imagery.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 July 2021

BUT you get the 5 Stars Fullest On Top for your poem full of brilliance. Surely I have enjoyed again!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 July 2021

Outside the limits of this earth, Where there is neither sun nor moon, Neither earth nor the sky above., I am the only one asking you, dear cute poet, I cannot find that serene life, since I am nowhere upon this earth at all as you desrcibed that so, Sir.

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Sandra Feldman 20 July 2021

We are all in such need of serenity and peace as you, dear poet so well describe in your lovely poem. But I'm afraid that perfect world only exists in the verses of a poem like this. Great write, anyway!

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Rebecca Navarre 19 July 2021

I love these thoughts they bring such a beautiful feel to the heart! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 19 July 2021

Magnificent! .. Ever so enchanting! .. Filled with such beauty, heart and peace! .. Simply wonderful! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Juhaina Tumlu 19 July 2021

From time bound life to time less journey. Great one.

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Varsha M 19 July 2021

Sir this is beautiful. Indeed Chain of time, chain of work all makes us difficult. We all seek that that. Beautiful sirji

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 18 July 2021

This imagery rich verse is very peaceful and beautifully written.5 stars

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Anjandev Roy 18 July 2021

In peace, forever and ever.....wonderful..

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Lasaad Tayeb 18 July 2021

Incredibly penned poem, full of imagery and thought-provoking ideas, rated 5*

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Suzon Albert 18 July 2021

Out of this world...Nice poem.

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me poet yeps poet 18 July 2021

YES I READ THIS MAN

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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