Friday, January 11, 2013

Where Lies True Bliss? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where encased is the secret of bliss
Is it encoded in any talisman abstruse?
Does it linger unseen on the face of angelic babes
Who, with smiles and laughter create such heavenly vibes?
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Valsa George
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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 September 2020

A splendid poem! I derive utmost pleasure to read this magnificent piece of poetry time and again! Great ink dear madam, great ink!

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Vaibhav Simha 23 April 2020

Apart from the deific message conveyed through this poem, I was exhilarated by the vivid imagery and intricacy exhibited by almost every assortment of words. As a person who gormandizes nature and delves into its beauty, I am in love with this line, for some reason: " Or in the setting sun's embers of amber and maroon." A worthwhile read for sure.

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Savita Tyagi 02 May 2019

So beautiful! How did I miss reading it. Love the last lines. The true answer to the question lies in there. The best part is I think is that a heart full of love finds bliss in the The things narrated above, some thing that a heart full with hatred can’t see or feel. Thank you for sharing Valsa.

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M Asim Nehal 22 March 2019

A wonderful poem on the subject. Food for the thoughts. Nicely penned.10+

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 March 2019

Though happiness is.subjective, this write provides an insight on where we could draw our happiness. The ultimate stanza provides where lies.true.bliss according to the great Poetess. A.beautifully crafted and well executed poem with great theme 10++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 March 2019

A marvelous poem. A pure poetic joy. I liked the way this beautiful poem has been painted in the reader's mind through excellent imagery. The great Poetess so vividly conveyed in detail the sources of happiness.

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Valsa George 21 March 2019

I am bowled over by your sweet comment! Thank you Rose Marie!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 March 2018

Due to some technical issues, I am not able to vote these days! I vote it with a 10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 March 2018

To explore the secret of bliss, you have raised series of insightful questions in each stanza that invite readers to introspect and speculate! Your last stanza provides a compact and befitting answer to all queries! I really appreciate your style of penning! As a reader, I get tremendous pleasure reading your poems! Sure, I will revisit to take a few more drops of nectar from this beautiful poem!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 March 2018

It’s my great pleasure to read such a marvelous poem! I like the way you imagine different situations, the manner you comprehend naked reality of life and express them in sweet words! The incessant quest for searching true bliss has been beautifully depicted in this fabulous poem! Before reviewing it, let me wish you belated congratulations for this brilliant poem was chosen as the POD! (may be I am too late) (Cont…)

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Ratnakar Mandlik 12 July 2017

Embodiment of a superb flight of imagery, as usual. Heartiest Congratulation on the poetess of the Day.

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Sandra Feldman 12 July 2017

Beautifully asked Beautifully written Hearts are smitten When Poetry Speaks And reaches Such Artistic Peaks. Well done! A real pleasure.

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Hi Valsa! Hearty Congratulations! I am glad i did not miss this poem! As always, a superb poem! Kudos!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 July 2017

Congratulations! This is nice to see your poem here as the poem of the day. With smiles and laughter bliss is created with such heavenly feeling. Bliss is in secret embrace. With shining moon or setting sun we search for bliss. In this Earth with union of love in hearts we hope to get bliss. An amazing verse is shared here....10

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Kim Barney 12 July 2017

Valsa, my dear friend, so nice to see this poem chosen again as poem of the day. You deserve the honor, although there are many other poems of yours that could also have been chosen. Congratulations!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 July 2017

Congratulations for the selection of this poem as 'Poem of the Day'..., The poem is worth being awarded. Can it be somewhere in heavens so high Beneath the fluffy clouds quietly gliding neigh Can sweet Paradise be the seat of bliss Where seraphs sing, angels dance and nothing is amiss Nay, it surely resides not in worlds beyond But here on Earth, in the union of hearts with love abound. Your art of composing has been so elegant. Thanks for the sharing.

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Hazel Durham 12 July 2017

Outstanding write Valsa, bliss is reading this beautifully penned write that soars with your wisdom and beauty of your words! Bliss is two hearts united and we all strive for passion entwined, souls marching in time, hand in hand and hearts united forever! Congratulations for Poet of the Day so well deserved Valsa you're an inspiration to budding poets!

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Rajnish Manga 12 July 2017

Congratulations on this coveted selection of this poem as 'Poem of the Day'. This is my second visit here and I am swayed by the beauty of the poem yet again. Naturally, True Bliss is here: Nay, it surely resides not in worlds beyond But here on Earth, in the union of hearts with love abound.

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A good poem Valsa.. Congratulations to be member of the day Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Simone Inez Harriman 12 July 2017

I too was excited to see your name with your stunning poem of the day. Congratulations for this well deserved award. I do believe that bliss is here on Earth and foremost in the heart that is open. A beautiful poem from a beautiful person.

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 July 2017

Hi Valsa, First, congrats for Poet of the Day. This wonderful poem deserves it most!

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