Tuesday, September 24, 2013

Where It All Began Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hold me in your memory,
Wrap me around your heart,
Repeat the words you said to me
That made the heavens part;
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Lora Colon
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Khairul Ahsan 12 October 2013

This is a wonderful poem of love and passion,10/10! Each stanza is quotable, I liked the last one the most, though! 'Love me 'til the angels blush And offer reprimand..... Take me back to where it all began' Yes, 'where it all began' is the sweetest memory that is unforgettable, and we all wish to go back there. ' Passionate moments etched in time, And so our days were planned..... Take me back to where it all began Heart warming!

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Ken E Hall 03 October 2013

lovely poem seems it all turned circle for the end is where it begins where hearts hold hands always, very nice to read Where it all began...regards

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Valerie Dohren 02 October 2013

Really lovely poem Lora, very well written and rhymed.

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John Brown 29 September 2013

I like this one. Time is fleeting, and the most should be made of every moment.

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Abhishek Mishra 28 September 2013

Beautiful write...loved it: -)

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 28 September 2013

Take me back to where it all began a yearning deep and divine, sketched with dripping memories!

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Zandile Wardle 27 September 2013

lovely...i like. good staff

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 September 2013

so soothing to the heart and mind.love the flow and emotion in it.liked it.

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Savita Tyagi 25 September 2013

So beautiful! almost spiritual. Words flowing with so much ease. Thank you for sharing, enjoyed every line.

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Lora Colon

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