Tuesday, January 25, 2011

Where Is Time? Comments

Rating: 4.9

Time and tide waits for none
But I have waited all alone for one
It is none other than my ideal son
At last my time has begun!
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Rekha Mandagere
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Luo Zhihai 20 December 2020

Time, endless. But human time is limited. Cherish time!

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Khairul Ahsan 24 June 2018

Mother's love for her son or daughter is ethereal and eternal, it never ceases, it transcends all barriers and borders. A nice poem that I enjoyed reading.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 June 2012

I have a son myself, he is a great comfort to me.

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Terence George Craddock 19 September 2011

The title 'Where Is Time? ' intrigues with the longing, internal wait for an 'ideal son'. This eternal love for the awaited child, this universal longing, can be expressed in many ways. One of the best mystic ways is as you have said 'The concept, time is infinite and undefined' which flows into many universal truth. Your son is fortunate to recieve such unconditional love as his blessing. Beautiful sentiments.

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Bernard Snyder 23 August 2011

Hello my friend. I haven't heard from you in some time. I just thought I would dropp by and read some of your poems again. Stay in touch and I also rated some of them again!

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Walterrean Salley 05 July 2011

A beautiful tribute, well written. Your som must be very proud of you. Thanks for sharing. Would you take a few moments to read my poem titled: 'Time's Better Side.' Thanks.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 28 June 2011

Stretch your few seconds of mine to the eternal bounds; Make me feel your life all around. ................................................what a glory of filial love, time yet needs bliss of moments in sharing eternal feel ever unshaken from soul of mother who mothers the child to a man of her dream yet bespeckling her joy and sorrow together to weave a dream of tomorrow, wonderful tribute from a mother to her son, and eternity seems to write the bondage in space infinite in ages and eons, beautiful write,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Alto Thomas Jr 25 June 2011

It seems that you are committed to parenthood being your 'first-best destiny'.

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Antonio Liao 20 April 2011

an infinitum of time, leave my courage to find the eternal passion to hold the beginning of life....such lines/words create terrific evolution of what is eternal destiny of man... God bless… a 10+++

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Unwritten Soul 17 March 2011

Where's time? Here and everywhere in any space... and we breathe in time with air Where's time? I cant tell you specifically where, because it with me when i read your poem But u ask again where's time? ? I told you i dont know the exact place but time with me when i smile for your poem No matter where's time Because when i smiled that's time for you Ma Rekha-Unwritten Soul

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Louis Cecile 16 March 2011

I enjoyed the way this poem interlinked and each line compares the two links. Very well done simply written, but with meaning.

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Cristina Teodor 16 March 2011

This poem is a nice invitation to your son, and a wonderful question. You interpose time 'infinite and undefined' with love to your son.This two things are connected in order to let you to exert your duty as a mother to your son.Your time is 'short interval but well defined'. So you invite your son to 'Stretch your few seconds of mine to eternal bounds' to 'make me feel your life all around'.You show as that time is never enough for a mother to a enjoy her son..Cristina Teodor

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Sally Plumb Plumb 10 March 2011

I enjoy special time with my son, too.

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Bernard Snyder 01 March 2011

Wow! Rekha! This is a lovely piece. Well- worded and written with a lot of love and passion. I give it a 10' as well. I am truly a fan! Thanks for sharing. I will continue to read more as long as you keep writing. You can rate some of mine if you like!

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Wendy Thopliss 26 February 2011

I love your poems you write for your son. they show such love only a mother could feel. if you get time please read my (will he still love me) i think you might enjoy it as it is also about love.

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Jenny Gordon 16 February 2011

Ya, that precious time together with your cherished well-beloved, while time waits for none, and is fleetest when most wanted...what a fascinating contemplation, and yet another well-written tribute to an affectionate, doting mother and her precious son. The title poses the everlasting question in that love, for time is forever insufficient in that arena. Beautiful! !

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 09 February 2011

a naive expression, touching. marks 10

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Pacific Hernandez 07 February 2011

You gave substance to intangible time. A very nice poem. I like the thought and rhyme.

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