Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Where Is This Going? Comments

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When I meet you, the stars come down and a smile spreads across my face
The moon lights me in grace

When you talk, the birds stop by listening to your melodious voice
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Jinal Oswal
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 19 January 2013

Ah lovelife is tricky, i can relate to this somehow. A wondrful freeverse poem. Pls read mine too.

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