Friday, August 3, 2012

Where Is The Tie Back? Comments

Rating: 5.0

This place is suffocating with old and pungent air,
The unopened windows and not drawn curtains,
Where is the tie back, that is lost to the lie bags,
Just tie the curtain, let the sunshine gets in,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Chandra Thiagarajan 03 August 2012

The suffocating atmosphere when doors are closed is well brought out in the meaningful poem.Comparing the fresh air to a meaningful verse is excellent.Where is the tie back, I have to tie back the curtain first.is very appealing.Well written.

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