Where Is The Sun Comments

very well worded, its as if you chose each rhyme with precise thought and consideration.

'If you know what its like to lose someone, Than you know what life is like without the sun.' I love this poem from beginning to end. The first line by itself is breathtaking, and sets the tone.10/10!

interesting point of veiw...to live losing the love of life is kind of like nothing matters at all...just the time passing by but all you think of is the person who made your life...hmmm good poem..good tone and sight... keep writing

We can still survive without the SUN, BUT NOT FOR LONG.Love is life, like the Sun, not for long.Not yet, not yet!

Ah but to love and to loose is better then to have never loved at all someone once said. Wonder who that dichead was? ? ? ?

very poignant write my dear friend.....10+

Poems like this can only come from experience. If I thought of how many times my life just seemed lke it was on hold when I lost somebody, fingers and toes wouldn't come close to a count.