Tuesday, March 3, 2015

Where Is The Sun? ! Comments

Rating: 4.0

It seems like the sun is hidden
Waking up all I see is clouds
They are like grey depressing pillows
Covering the sky
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Daniela Mercelina
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Allotey Abossey 15 June 2015

i love the organization of this poem, well arranged and meaning clear. good one there my friend. God bless you

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Daniela Mercelina 16 June 2015

Thx u very much Allotey! ! Amen

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Chinedu Dike 30 April 2015

A brilliant and highly philosophical poem, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Indeed, behind the storms and ugly clouds the Sun is always shining. A lovely poem with powerful message. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Chinedu thank you very much for your comment really appreciate it! ! I will surely read your poem.

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