Saturday, June 30, 2018

Where Is The Pity? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where is the pity
that I should feel?
my life now is just a spinning wheel
why should I have pity?
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Aqua Flower
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Carl Roussell 02 July 2018

Some who want the most will give the least; and you almost forget to take care of yourself. A 10.

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Rini shibu 30 June 2018

A powerful write, well penned

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Aqua Flower 02 July 2018

Thank you ..it was a powerful storm which brought strong emotions.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 June 2018

Life is a spinning wheel. But life gathers many experiences. Hopelessness provokes thought but you can feel life well with trust. We hope life will be full of joy. An amazing poem is shared...10

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Robert Murray Smith 30 June 2018

A powerful write that screams at the universe.++10

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