Sunday, April 7, 2013

Where Is The Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where is the night that I may rest
In silent solitude
Amidst the moonlit starry skies
With peacefulness imbued
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Valerie Dohren
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Full of freedom and bursting with beauty. Well done my friend!

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R.j. Wynn 02 May 2013

Perfection, a life without chains.

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Walterrean Salley 25 April 2013

Shows the sweet and lovely side of night. Many times, at the end of the day, I am so worn and look forward to the night for the nurturing it offers. Very lovely creation here.

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Yasmin Khan 18 April 2013

A wish to meet eternity because soul is tired and weary and chained in the course of days and nights...a soft and mellow poem by a very mature poet

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Sally Plumb Plumb 16 April 2013

A sweet and mellow piece.

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Kelvin Owusu 15 April 2013

a peaceful poem, thoughts of a blissful dreamer excellent write

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David Wood 13 April 2013

Only in my dreams am I truly free. A lovely poem Valerie.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 April 2013

A poem that calls for freedom freedom of any kind..soul's freedom from body, to get rid og tiredness and rest in peace is also the freedom from age, poem speaks about the quality of the poet.....thank you Valerie wanna to read more,

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Ray Quesada 12 April 2013

very musical - i really think this deserves a 10. Glad i stumbled onto this one tonight -

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Josh Dinkin 10 April 2013

Nice One Valerie. Keep up the good poetry!

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Leanna Noto 09 April 2013

I really enjoyed reading this poem it is very lovely!

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Dave Walker 09 April 2013

A beautiful poem, a really wonderful flow to it.

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Godfrey Morris 08 April 2013

soothing poem, beautifully done.

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Unwritten Soul 08 April 2013

You are mastery in soothing writing poetry...somehow this poem really fit me well..and night is always my time where i and moon have a journey in the sea of celestial dark...well done and very well done haahaha liked it much_Soul

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Valsa George 07 April 2013

We hopefully wait to 'soar above to regions where our heart and soul are free. Beautiful! !

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David Wood 07 April 2013

A beautiful poem particularly the last stanza. I like it.

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Hazel Durham 07 April 2013

Night time is like a soothing balm to relish tranquillity and peace bound by complete freedom of spirit! Inspired write!

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Yasmin Khan 07 April 2013

Your poem expresses the wish that dearly resides in your heart and maybe in every heart but we are 'tethered in worldly things'...so true a soul soaring in serenity..love it |

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