Tuesday, July 20, 2021

Where Is The Beacon Comments

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When will the sun rise again
In my life soaked by the rain?
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Luis A. Estable 21 July 2021

This has its merit. I think the lines pair well. The whole thing makes sense, both factual and poetically.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 July 2021

Though life is soaked by the rain, the sun will always appear after dawn, like at the end of the tunnel is always light, Your short poem get me pondering about my own life. Excellent words, Rev.Bernard Sir

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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