Wednesday, September 26, 2012

Where Is My Mind? Comments

Rating: 4.0

Where is my mind?
Where has it gone?
Like a leaf pushed by wind,
it has traveled the earth.
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Soren Valentine
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Caroline Bulleck 03 October 2012

You have excellent word choice, imagery, flow, ryme scheme and message. It held my attention and I liked it very much. I give it a rating of 8.

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Poet Dragon 26 September 2012

Some compulsions exit, and some never stray the mind is only living if you feed it every day.

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