Where I've Been Comments

blood is thicker than water

Where I've Been -I love your first line. I'm burning up inside, Feelings along with my pride, Step inside, let's begin this ride, Check the tears that I have cried, I'm crying for change. Great! T.

Inner world full of pain, suppressed feelings, depressions and struggle portrayed well.. I liked these lines very much I've filled this life with regret and pain, Sorrow as I speak, dismay in my name, I shed tears of lonesome in the form of rain, Cry with me now for it's time to change! ! .. thanks

A very poignant and touching poem Joshua.. Thank you for sharing..

real change does have to come from deep within when any lie gets tossed and truth can replace it, which frees (just doing what is right) a wonderful bright energy thru this grand poem!