Wednesday, January 27, 2016

Where I'm From Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am from gold chains
From Folger's and chocolate chip cookies in the morning
I am from the first house on the left "Old and spooky"
(Wide and tall, magnificent yet eerie in sight)
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Victor Adex 12 January 2018

have you ever considered Spoken words? or doing open mic, your poems are good

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Jeremy Willson 12 January 2018

I have thought about it, and my friends tell me i should do n mics but i have terrible anxiety so im not too fond of the idea getting up on stage and exploring my mental instablity and or how i actually feel t my life to others.

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Victor Adex 16 January 2018

that's a good point. although nobody is cool on stage the first time, and we all could benefit form living out others experience in there poetry. either way you decision stands

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Soul Watcher 28 January 2016

Very nice piece of poetry, thank you for sharing

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 27 January 2016

Good work. Liked it '10'

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Ravinder Soni 27 January 2016

Interesting definitions.

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Jeremy Willson

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Brandon, FL
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