Where I Go When I Disappear Comments

let me read this again....i like it. MyPoemList is getting pretty long, but i'll add this to it anyway. many of my poems have very long lines, and sometimes i've chopped each line in half to make the poem look different. i like your short lines; they are very effective. some parts could be misread or perhaps read two different ways because of the lack of punctuation. ok. and the lines: Is that I can't take you with me But only once in awhile.....they throw me a bit. it sounds as though you can't take you with me but once in awhile you/me do/does take you. i especially enjoyed the lines: Sometimes You can catch a glimpse But only through these words ...........thanks for sharing. :)