I think the last word was 'dream' not 'cream' - but on the whole your poem is excellently written and the thoughts you related quite common to man. Very Good! ! ! ! !
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I think the last word was 'dream' not 'cream' - but on the whole your poem is excellently written and the thoughts you related quite common to man. Very Good! ! ! ! !