Tuesday, February 23, 2010

Where I Could Be Myself Comments

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I have been in search of a place
for a number of years,
Where i could be myself
with my eyes full of tears.
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Manas Barpande
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 23 February 2010

I think the last word was 'dream' not 'cream' - but on the whole your poem is excellently written and the thoughts you related quite common to man. Very Good! ! ! ! !

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